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I am sick.
I am wrong.
I am a sinner.
I am a threat.
I am a defect.
I am immoral.
I am mutated.
I am a pervert.
I am shameful.
I am abnormal.
I am unnatural.
I am shameless.
I am disgusting.
I am distasteful.
I am compulsive.
I am destructive.
I am sacrilegious.
I am promiscuous.
I am a delinquent.
I am blasphemous.
I am incompatible.
I am just not right.
I am an abomination.

I should be saved.
I should be healed.
I should be converted.
I should be condemned.
I should be hospitalized.
I should commit suicide.
I should be punished by death.

I have a sexual disorder.
I have committed a crime.

I am not what you say I am.
I should not be who you say I should be.
I have not done what you say I have done.
I will not be who you say I should be.
I am who I say I am.

I have an amazing personality.
I have an open heart.
I have an open mind.
I have aspirations.
I have dreams.

I should not have to be afraid.
I should be treated equally.
I should not be oppressed.
I should not be criticized.
I should not have to hide.

I am not a criminal.
I am your daughter.
I am your neighbor.
I am not diseased.
I am not a sinner.
I am your friend.
I am emotional.
I am optimistic.
I am beautiful.
I am an artist.
I am amazing.
I am a fighter.
I am creative.
I am natural.
I am human.
I am honest.
I am caring.
I am sweet.
I am not ill.
I am loving.
I am proud.
I am moral.
I am smart.
I am loyal.
I am gay.
I think it is pretty self-explanatory.

Critiques not encouraged.

(Better viewed centered)

Edit:

I moved a couple of the stanzas around.
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Shad0wf1re Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2010
Amazing.
But i think uou missed one.
Apparently anyone who is bi or gay is going to hell.
Just lie me :D
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iluvwritin Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2010  Student Interface Designer
Thanks for the comment. :)
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PristineAndPutrid Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
This, is plain out amazing.
I've never read anything like it, but I love this.

Well done.
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iluvwritin Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2009  Student Interface Designer
Thanks hun. :]
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billxmaster Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2009  Student Photographer
u should of put i am gay at the end... but thats just me :P
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billxmaster Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2009  Student Photographer
i see a perfect point to this :] u never stop amuzing me
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superupaman Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2009  Professional Traditional Artist
At some places it sounded too much.. If i may say unwanted, but indeed you're not what anyone says you are.. ;) so it doesn't really matter (if it really doesn't) whatsoever and whosoever says about what you've written. But i'd say it's never bad to take constructive criticism...We must be open to learning. Btw it was a good read. There are many sad things in the first stanzas and that eventually hit a mind so hard and pours out a gallon of liquid emotions..many questions..but i think if you really don't care.. It's no point asking them..nevertheless one thing i must say.. Never suicide.Nor does let anyone force you to do that.
Like your confidence though. Good write. Appreciated. Take care dear.
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iluvwritin Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2009  Student Interface Designer
The reason I ask for no constructive criticism is because it's a pretty emotional piece for me. And the negative things are what makes it. I've had some of these things said to me directly. In fact, my roommate's mother hates that her daughter is living with a queer and wants her to get a roommate change strictly because of it. These negative things do happen. You may ask questions if you wish, but I just wish not to get criticism on the piece itself.

Thanks for reading.
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superupaman Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2009  Professional Traditional Artist
It's your write and your right to decide if you deny any sort of criticism. That's no problem. And moreover if it's an emotional piece (which every piece should be for an artist) then i completely understand it, and respect your decision. So i'm not saying anything about it in that sense. I know it was an intense write.
My questions were rather connected to you, not about the write. If i may ask dear.. Is there anything i can do to bring a smile to your face, i'd love to.
I could read the rage.. the wrath.. I wish things will be sweet for you dear. My blessings to you.
Feel free to share, anytime.
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iluvwritin Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2009  Student Interface Designer
A smile is always within me as I know they only ridicule because they are not as privileged as I to lead such a diverse life.
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